Just as Mathias Enard’s Zone was eligible for this year’s Independent Foreign Fiction Prize despite having been published in the US in 2010, so Valeria Luiselli’s Faces in the Crowd has made it onto the Best Translated Book Award shortlist on the strength of its US publication date though its first appearance in English was in 2012 thanks to Granta and translator Christian MacSweeney. It may be a short novel, but it tells a number of stories which come to inhabit each other in the process of the telling.
It begins with two narratives from the author’s life running parallel: one from her past recounting her life in New York working for a publisher; the other set in her present, now married, with two small children to look after, and attempting to write the novel we are reading. In the latter she focuses on the difficulties of finding time and space:
“A silent novel, so as not to wake the children.”
“Novels,” she argues, “need a sustained breath.” Her children, she says, don’t let her breath: “Everything I write is – has to be – in short bursts. I’m short of breath.” This is exactly the format the novel takes with short sections, rarely over a page, moving from one narrative to the other or presenting sequential scenes. The apparently autobiographical nature of the writing is also challenged in the present day commentary, particularly via the husband’s questions:
“My husband is angry. Through my own carelessness, he’s read some more of these pages. He asks how much is fiction and how much fact.”
The fictionalising of facts is also at the centre of the New York narrative as the author attempts to interest the publisher, White, in the minor Mexican poet Gilberto Owen by linking him to one of White’s favourite poets, Joseph Zvorsky:
“White had an affinity for Zvorsky…it occurred to me that this could be my means of convincing White about the importance of Gilberto Owen.”
She tells White that she has discovered translations of Owen’s poems by Zvorsky: “It was the most unlikely of all possible lies about Owen, and White never believed it, but he decided to go along with me.” Owen becomes an ever more prominent character in the novel, firstly through the author’s post-it notes of her research, and then when he becomes a further voice in the first person narrative. We know, however, that parts of the life Luiselli gives Owen are fictional – including his friendships with not only Zvorsky but Federico Garcia Lorca (based entirely on their proximity at the time).
Luiselli’s intention is not simply to tell these stories but to convince us that they co-exist. The origin of the novel’s title lies in Ezra Pound’s ‘In a Station of the Metro’:
The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet, black bough.
We are told that the poem was inspired by Pound glimpsing the face of dead friend in the crowd at a Metro station. This leads to Luiselli using both ghosts and the subway as recurring motifs throughout the novel. The author tells her son she is writing a “ghost story” and later describes herself as a “literary ghostwriter.” Owen is later called a ghost by a blind man he meets:
“You’re a ghost, Mr Owen, isn’t that so?”
He goes on to say he knows because he can see him. The author herself is greeted in New York with the question, “Are you the ghost that lives up here?” and, in the present, her son regards their apartment as haunted. This talk of ghosts is literary rather than supernatural, though:
“I once read in a book by Saul Below that the difference between being alive and being dead is just a matter of viewpoint.”
Ghosts are characters drawn from the past, but also those fading from their present: obscure poets, struggling authors. The subway becomes a reservoir of ghosts, an underworld of the dead hoping to return to the surface. Owen sees both Pound and the author on his travels there:
“The woman appeared most often in those moments when two trains on parallel tracks are travelling at almost the same speed for a few instants and you can see other people go past as if you were watching the frames of a celluloid reel.”
As the novel nears its end the author becomes more and more isolated, as if she were less and less present in the world as Owen’s character grows stronger. The novel’s conclusion seems created by the novel’s conclusion.
Faces in the Crowd manages to be both serious and playful (surely the decision to feature an obscure poet is a nod towards Bolano, who is also name-checked in the novel). It announces the presence of a fascinating new writer. Luckily, those of us in the UK don’t have to wait to see what she will do next: her second novel, The Story of my Teeth, has just been published.
May 17, 2015 at 5:29 pm |
I’ve heard so much about this one – plus it sounds like the story of my life – so I really need to read it. I want to try and stick to my #TBR20 first, though.
May 17, 2015 at 5:37 pm |
I’m now very intrigued about the story of your life! You will certainly need to read it and see if the comparison stands up.
In the meantime, I am considering another go at #TBR20 having stalled at 19 the last time! I have to admire your willpower.
May 17, 2015 at 5:44 pm
19 – oh, no, so close! I’d have cheated a little and waited until my 20th, even if there were a couple of mistakes along the way.
May 18, 2015 at 7:53 pm
Believe me – 19 was counting everything! I failed because I had to get the IFFP books for the shadow jury. I didn’t want to wait as I had a lot of reading to do!
However, I have rather fallen off the wagon since then!
May 17, 2015 at 5:50 pm |
Like Marina I want to read this as the premise ‘attempting to write the novel … focuses on the difficulties of finding time and space:’ really resonates… Luckily I’ve already got it so can count it in my third attempt at #TBR20 😜
May 18, 2015 at 7:44 pm |
The first half is particularly good on the difficulties of finding time and space to write.
I’m glad you already have it – I would hate to have anything to do with sabotaging your third attempt!
May 17, 2015 at 8:46 pm |
Excellent review, Grant. I really enjoyed this one when I read it a few years ago. There is something quite haunting about the narrative. I can recommend her essay collection, Sidewalks – in fact, I think it’s even better than Faces.
May 18, 2015 at 7:46 pm |
This was actually a re-read for me – I’d read it before but never reviewed it (I found it quite a difficult book to pin down). Must now get round to reading Sidewalks – recommended by so many!
May 17, 2015 at 10:17 pm |
Great review of a wonderful book. I just wanted to know in reference to your response to MarinaSofia above, when you stalled on a #TBR20 attempt at 19, was that counting down from 20 or up from 1? Just curious. I need to try that exercise before I begin to look like a hoarder!
May 18, 2015 at 7:47 pm |
Thanks.
While it would have shown a certain panache to have failed #TBR20 after one book, it was after 19 – caused by having to acquire the IFFP books!
May 18, 2015 at 7:59 pm
Darn that IFFP and you were so close! I think I will try a shorter commitment, maybe 5, then 10 and work up to 20. Oh and take them to the proverbial desert island to be sure I don’t get distracted!
May 18, 2015 at 7:01 am |
And therein lies the reason I started blogging, it too can be done in short bursts. Love this!
I concur with Jacqui, her essays are excellent, I just wrapped a copy and gave it to a friend for her b’day on Friday. Her meandering style seems very suited to the essay and she brings freshness to that genre too.
May 18, 2015 at 7:50 pm |
The essays seem unavoidable now, so many people recommending them.
I must admit, there are times I find it hard to find the time to blog!
(Hope you don’t mind – I just removed the typo from your comment)
May 19, 2015 at 7:35 am
Thank you, it’s annoying we can’t fix typos on comments, I always fix them.
Yes, I just went a month without posting and felt the lack terribly, too many visitors, too much talking, not enough time to reflect and write. I never feel guilty about not posting, it’s more that the time I seize to do it, is so necessary, it’s my equilibrium. No reviews for me indicates life’s out of balance. A sad life I know, but there it is. 🙂
May 18, 2015 at 12:25 pm |
This was a great read (and ‘Sidewalks’ was good too). I have a copy of the latest one, so I should be tempted to give it a try at some point soon…
May 18, 2015 at 7:51 pm |
I’ve also got her new one – it prompted me to re-read this, along with the BTBA listing. Hope it’s as good.
September 1, 2017 at 1:23 pm |
You’ve captured the book much better than I did, perhaps reflecting your greater engagement with it than I had. As you saw I didn’t take to it which is of course reflected in my thoughts on it.
September 2, 2017 at 8:09 pm |
Thanks, but I thought many of your criticisms were quite fair. She is a writer I like but not one I feel is deserving of some of the lavish praise she’s received at times.