Of all the novels on the 2011 Booker Prize short list, it was perhaps A. D. Miller’s Snowdrops, self-consciously styled as a thriller, which most caused accusations of dumbing down. (It was, in fact marketed very much in the manner of Tom Rob Smith’s Child 44, also set in Russia, which had made it onto the Booker long-list in 2008). Snowdrops begins with the recovery of a corpse but its dynamic is not that of a murder mystery, instead focusing on the corruption of an Englishman abroad: Graham Greene with guilt-free capitalism replacing the angst-ridden Catholicism. However, if the judges cannot be criticised for a descent into genre fiction, they can be questioned where it matters: Snowdrops does not at any point seem like a prize-winning novel. It is not that it is terrible, only that it is rather ordinary.
Its theme is corruption and Miller cleverly runs a number of stories in parallel to make his point. The narrator, Nicholas, is an English lawyer who is working in Moscow arranging contracts between banks and businesses. The novel follows one particular deal where loans are arranged on the basis of oil; it is quickly transparent that the businessman in question (‘the Cossack’, who appears as if borrowed from a 1980s Bond film) cannot be trusted but Nicholas and his boss, Paolo, carry on regardless. At the same time Nicholas meets and falls in love with a Russian girl, Masha, who he has met on the subway. Again, her honesty is soon called into question: her ‘sister’ Katya is not her sister, and the ‘aunt’, Titiana, she has asked Nicholas to help sell her apartment is no relation. Though it becomes apparent that the intention is to dupe Titiana out of her valuable Moscow property, Nicholas carries on for fear of losing Masha. (Ironically, Nicholas and Paolo often use the expression ‘Lipstick on a pig’ in relation to the kind of businessmen they deal with; Nicholas becomes the lipstick in the plan to fool Titiana).
However, the novel’s swiftly irritates in its choice of a narrative device that requires the narrator to tell his story to another character ‘off-camera’:
“You’re always saying I never talk about my time in Moscow or about why I left. You’re right, I’ve always made excuse, and soon you’ll understand why.”
Of course this effect is not a mistake in itself – it works well enough for Heart of Darkness, a novel we can only hope Miller was not attempting to evoke comparisons with – but it is so clumsily handled that it only ever succeeds in puncturing any tension created and does not deliver any pay-off at the conclusion. Even more bizarrely, the audience is Nicholas’ fiancée, (“only three months away from the ‘big day’”) raising questions of plausibility at the very least. Is it traditional to confess to a previous love affair in as much detail as possible to the person you intend to marry?
The only possible explanation I can think of is that it allows Miller to continually demonstrate an ‘insider’s’ knowledge of Moscow with asides such as:
“Over the blouse she had one of those funny Brezhnev-era coats that Russian women without much money often wear.”
Or:
“They loved photographing each other, the girls in Russia – something about the novelty of cameras, I think, and the idea they might matter enough to have their pictures taken.”
The generalisations come thick and fast, and although they present an interesting (though never vivid) picture of the country, they do so in the manner of journalism rather than literature. They also reduce the dimensions of the Russian characters. When we are told that Katya “smiled the other smile that they have, the Asiatic smile that means nothing” the observation may be clever but it also reduces her to a type. There is a point where one begins to wonder if Nicholas himself sees the other characters as ‘real’.
Nicholas, however, is certainly credible, if unsympathetic. It is hard to feel he is an innocent who becomes corrupted as his very job requires him to turn a blind eye to criminality, though Miller succeeds in personalising this attitude through his deception of Titiana, ensuring he is seen as complicit. He is also not driven by any noble motives: he simply wants to have sex with a young, attractive woman while deluding himself that he is not paying for it. Finally, he doesn’t feel particularly bad about it. He makes it quite clear that he regrets losing Masha more than anything else (a rather strange confession to make to your prospective bride).
Miller paints a depressing picture of capitalist Russia, and the novel certainly has the ‘readability’ factor the Booker judges were looking for, but, in the end, there is little that raises it above mediocre.








